Brooklyn Bound (except)

as the wind blew by him a circle of leaves formed and scattered away , the damp air filled his nostrils with contempt , Adam couldn't for the life of him remember how he got to this dark place , Prospect park was so big but he felt so small . HE had nothing anymore , no friends , no family just himself and he wasn't worth anything.  

Somethings Wrong by Antoine Clyburn Jr

as i look all around me
nothing is a surprise
no gleam in the masses
no absence of disguise

who we are is determined by
the merits of what we have accomplished
but that's bull shit

what if we cant Accomplish because we
can't get ahead
no one wants to hire
there fore there's no bread
but we are lazy , we are bums
just don't want to work?

the rich get richer
thats apart of the perk
of government , no one
suppose to get more then what they
deserve thats how and why
there will always be a class system

it would be easier to burn money then to
give to people who really need it

it would be easier to fund programs that
fully keep people off the streets not for
just two years and after that they live in fear
of what the future holds

but it's too easy on the poor ,
the poor has to suffer , thats
just it end of discussion

Something is wrong

Poetry Book and Other News

I am putting the finishing touches on  my poetry book, meaning i have a lot of poems and i want to make sure the right one's go in my first publishing,

with that said , after i finish my first poetry book , i will start on a new novel and hopefully follow through with it .

WB exert is up in the short story section , so is Atomic.

"Wool" Toggle Coat

Is it bad that i like this Toggle Jacket i know some might say it is cheap but I'm not going against that argument, but i really like the look of the jacket , and who the hell cares what anyone says the Jacket is from drjays.com and the Jacket cost 54.00 and it comes in black and grey , i like the grey one better but they are both nice

Computer search pt 1: HP Black 110-1046NR Netbook PC with Intel

So i'm looking for a new or used computer doesn't matter and i have come across this great hp mini netbook 10 inch screen this netbook is a HP Black 110-1046NR Netbook PC with Intel Atom N270 Processor and Windows XP Home Edition, Refurbished yes refurbished but it lookes really appealing and its from walmart for $198.00 really can't beat that price

New Poetry : Substance

Substance

by Antoine Clyburn Jr

I just don't get the meaning
behind objects of Affections

Correlation meaning
suicidal subjection

IF you ask me , there is no
Substance to go about any of it

Guy chase girl only to sleep with her friend
girl takes him back and cheat with his brother ben


your too thin, or your too fat
people brainwashing people
whats up with that ,

being me is a crime because its
not who you are

living in ignorance being blind
is the right

but ignorance is bliss
when it helps hug your pillow at night
the substance is gone , inside it feels so wrong

Short Story : Atomic (Intro)

Atomic written by (insert) Antoine Clyburn Jr

For the life of Devin Strong he could not fathom how his life turned out, at 23 he had accomplished most of his dream, he graduated College getting his associates degree in liberal arts and later his masters in business and creative writing, his first book was published out of pure luck , he wrote it during his years of college . he looked out the window of his New York City Loft down at the little people , the people that he often would write about , the cars going by , the traffic then he looked up at the blue sky the white clouds going by so slowly it was as if it was slow motion . Devin smiled to himself , he did it , he accomplished what so many tried and most often failed to do . Devin turned around to look at his space , a big spacious loft that was colored a maroon and had antique white columns and baseboards, he had chocolate brown leather furniture and nice golden and orange accessories to match , his kitchen was open and granite counter tops made the space elegant , chrome appliances , that's when his cell phone rung bringing him back to reality he dug in his pocket and saw Zach , his Manager and friend calling

"hello Zach!" Devin answered plainly

"did you get the e-mail" Zach asked with excitement Devin wasn't thrilled with the press released he didn't like book signings , for all the people that loved a book there were the ones that showed up because they didn't like it and wanted to give hell.

"yes i got it, fresh off my mac book pro"

":oh so you finally got rid of that old PC"

"not quit its in my room, its my magic machine" Zach chuckled from Devin comment , Devin seemed to not want to give up his computer , it's where all his original thoughts and idea;'s were stored

:well there is a party after the signing in Chelsea, you are so going because well i need to get laid" Devin laughed.